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As the two cars sped onto the motorway they were been followed by three more, who wanted them dead. Ollie, a quite strong man with brown eyes and straight brown hair, was in the very first car; he must have been doing at least 90 mph and was driving for his life. Him and his colleague, James who had blue eyes and blond hair, were driving like lunatics and were not going to slow down for anything.

About one quarter of a mile behind were the other three cars trying their hardest to keep up with the speeding cars in front of them. In the cars were associates of the biggest criminal mastermind in America, Craig Nightmare, and he had been for most of the 21st Century. There orders were to seek and destroy the traitors that had turned their back on him when things were starting to get rough.

Meanwhile back in Ollie’s car he had noticed that he was running a bit low on petrol and was starting to get a bit nervous and worried as the last thing he wanted to do is be back down the road with Craig Nightmare’s partners. He radioed to James that he was running low just in case anything did happen.  

After another five minutes of chasing down the long stretch of motorway Ollie’s petrol gauge was now in deep red and he was nowhere near his final destination. All of a sudden the car started to judder and slowly grinded to a halt. He shouted to James through his radio ‘Keep going!’ as he frantically tried to get his car started again before they could catch up with them. He knew it was no use so he opened his car door and made a run for it.

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As soon as he got past the first lane of traffic he was totally surrounded by the enemy like a pack of wolves circling its prey. They were also armed which made it impossible to go anywhere except with them. He felt a big bash on the back of his head and then passed out.

Whilst this was happening James is almost at his hideout and is constantly trying to get in touch with Ollie but it is useless as he hasn’t heard from his friend for almost twenty minutes.

When Ollie wakes up he finds himself ...

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