For this assignment I am going to describe my own personality and compare it to what my friend thinks of my personality. I am also going to describe the evolution of behaviour and why people behave in the way they do.

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   For this assignment I am going to describe my own personality and compare it to what my friend thinks of my personality. I am also going to describe the evolution of behaviour and why people behave in the way they do.

What my friend Leigh thinks of my personality,

'When I first met Kerry I thought she was very loud and outgoing, and even quite scary. Now I know Kerry she's not scary at all, she's very flirtatious, trustworthy and honest. She is a great mate and very responsible. Kerry has mood swings and can get very touchy with certain issues. Kerry is very funny and cares about her friends.'

What I think of my personality,

' I think I have different types of personalities. In college I am very outgoing and flirtatious, I speak my mind and let people know what I think of them. Out of college I am also outgoing and quite loud. I socialise a lot with my friends and like to have a good time. I do have a sensitive side when people talk about my business but I need to learn to ignore them and let it go over my head. I try not to judge people on first impressions and I like to get to know as many people as possible.'

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Everyone has a different type of behaviour for different places, e.g. if you were at a friends house you would behave in your normal way but if you were going out somewhere formal you would behave in the manner expected of you. There are different ways to behave for everything you do. You are taught to behave in the way you do from the moment you are born. These behavioural traits are usually passed down through the generations in your family. People started to behave in their own way many years ago when they decided that things they were ...

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The writer has some basic understanding of personality and behaviour development, but there is a lack of referencing throughout the writing. The writer needs to show at this level, that they have read literature on the subject. It would be helpful to start with a clear definition of 'personality' and give a reference of the author who defined it. Then the writer needs to make it clear who categorized personality into the four different types. The work of Cattell and Eysenck are important when discussing personality, as well as Jung. The writer could read around the subject by looking at their work on personality types and then using them for referencing purposes. This would improve the overall score. 2 Stars