EDOMARUSE PATRICK BTEC COURSEWORK DISTINCTION DR MALIK
02/04/2009
WHAT ARE THE RISKS FROM ELECTRICITY?
Harm can be caused to any person when they are exposed to ‘live parts’ that are either touched directly or indirectly by means of some conducting object or material. Voltages over 50 volts AC or 120 volts DC are considered hazardous.
Electricity can kill. Each year about 1000 accidents at work involving electric shocks or burns are reported to the Health and Safety Executive (HSE). Around 30 of these are fatal, most of them arising from contact with overhead or underground power cables.
WHO IS MOST AT RISK FROM ELECTRICITY?
Anyone can be exposed to the dangers of electricity while at work and everyone should be made aware of the dangers.
Most electrical accidents occur because individuals:
- are working on or near equipment which is thought to be dead but which is, in fact, live
- misuse equipment or use electrical equipment which they know to be faulty.
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Quality of writing
The candidate often uses bullet-points which is I feel is appropriate for this type of work as the candidate is listing safety features and specific legal obligations, sometimes important information is easier to see if listed this way than if it were in a standardised paragraph. Furthermore scientific terms are used accurately and there no errors with spelling punctuation or grammar.
Level of analysis
This piece of writing is in the form of an informative leaflet rather than an essay therefore the fact that there is no conclusion is irrelevant, that said the information provided is accurate and the candidate has given a great deal of detail. In addition to this, the candidate has sensibly included a link to the resources they have used when researching information for this piece of work. It is always a good idea to include references to any sources you have used.
Response to question
The candidate gives a very in depth response, they have included the main risks and how these occur and have given safety information relating to the use of electricity. In addition to this they have clearly undergone independent research as they mention the legal obligations involved when dealing with electricity and they have provided information regarding the maintenance and insulation of electrical equipment. This is a good way to develop your essay and it shows a thorough understanding of the set topic.