Evaluate the case for using referenda to decide important issues in the UK

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Evaluate the case for using referenda to decide important issues in the UK

A referendum is a popular vote in which the people, rather than the elected representatives, resolve a political issue. Since the electorate is asked to vote directly on a particular issue, holding a referendum is a way of exercising direct democracy within a system of representative democracy. It is normally on one single issue with a straight yes or no answer on the implementation or continuance of a reform.

        There are a number of advantages to holding a referendum. They encourage political participation as people are actively asked to take an interest in one issue and vote for what they think is best. Referendums are often asked when parliament can not resolve an issue so by asking the electorate to vote they are provided, hopefully, with one clear answer. Referendums can effectively end a deadlock when discussing a political issue. They can increase the legitimacy of major reforms or measures that the government is planning to implement and are a good way of determining the public mood and can provide justification for introducing a certain reform. Referendums should give a clear answer to a question however there are often problems with this. Referendums are also the most direct form of democracy as the people’s views are clearly represented and help to make political decisions more legitimate. This leads to a better chance of the people accepting the decision if they feel that they have had a direct input in the decision making. Referendums could also prevent governments from enacting unpopular decisions if they receive a ‘no’ vote, such as in the 2004 referendum for regional governments in North-East England. They can also protect constitutional changes from attacks from future governments who may want to change certain acts. As the Scots voted for their own parliament in 1997 only the Scots could absolve this parliament now.

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        In the UK national referendums are usually used sparingly. However, there have been several important referendums held over important issues since 1973. In 1973 there was a referendum in Northern Ireland to decide whether it should remain part of the UK or join the Republic of Ireland. There was a large majority in favour of remaining part of the UK. However the voting figures became rather meaningless because it was boycotted by nationalists and government intentions were undermined. In 1975 a referendum was held over the issue of the UK remaining part of the EEC. There was a large majority ...

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Quality of Writing The candidate's spelling and grammar are excellent, and the quality of written communication of a high standard. I feel that some of the language used is too 'casual' for an academic purpose ('pretty essential', 'deadlock'), and this reduces the overall impression of the essay. However, this would almost certainly be overlooked at GCSE level.

Level of Analysis The level of analysis in this essay is its Achille's heel; the 'argument for' paragraph, in particular, feels more like a list of bulletpoints in favour of the use of referendums. However, there is development in the 'against' paragraph (the discussion of extra-political influences on the electorate, for example). The paragraph of case studies, mostly using Scottish and Welsh devolution is a fairly detailed description, and does present some arguments for/against referendums, but I feel that it would be better to work these into the rest of the essay and use them to develop the points made. The conclusion shows some more development, and it is made clear why the candidate has come to his/her conclusions but overall, there is a lack of detail in the essay, or explanation of why the points made support or contest referendums.

Response to Question The candidate has given a broad, but fairly shallow answer to the question. Many of the issues raised by the use referendums are discussed, demonstrating knowledge of the debate, but there is little or no development of the points the candidate makes, which is the flaw of this essay. Making fewer, more detailed points would improve the essay.