A Report on My Office Job Environment

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Richard Jones

A Report on My Office Job Environment

To:        Mrs McAulay

From:        Richard Jones

Date:        Autumn 2002-09-27

Introduction:

  1. The aim of the coursework is to investigate how a real business communicates within the business and with the out side world. Then I will make decisions to decide weather the way they communicate is the best way or if it can be improved. I will look at different ways in which the business I choose communicates internally and externally. After I analyse my data I will decide if there could be improvements.    

  1. The business I am going to use is Industrial Fork truck Parts Ltd, the contact I have I have chosen is my mum she is a personal assistant at the work place and she uses forms of communication mostly to contact clients in other countries.
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Research methods: I hope to research the internal and external ways in which the company I have chosen communicate. I hope to collect this information from 4 sources, my mum, her boss the Internet and by books. I will collect as much information as possible to. It also helps me a lot that my contact is my mum and that she works locally my mum should be able to give me enough information to help me complete my research.

Year 11 Communication studies

Communication Methods:

  • Letters: a letter is a written form of ...

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The report lists a number of technical terms, such as 'Letters' and 'E-Mail' and describes these using detail. In addition, the student also states whether each of these methods are an internal or external communication within the business. This is quite good, as the examiner is able to understand what each method is and understand how the business uses the method within their business.

The report mentions that one of their sources is going to be their Mother. This is quite good, as this is explaining the advantages of the source. However the other resources, such as Books and the Internet is quite limited. Thus, the report could state something on the lines of 'With the Internet and Books, I may not be able to find relevant information on the business's practices, as each business is different and using these two resources are aimed at an ideal business and this may not be as useful compared to other resources for the report'. The report lists a number of methods, however doesn't fully explain why it's an advantage or a disadvantage. For instance, the report could include 'E-Mails allows the business to keep a record of all the communication between the client and the business, this is a real advantage to the business, as it provides quick access if the business ever needs to re-look back on their previous work to confirm that an event has occurred'.

In summary, the report describes how the business uses a number of different communication methods, both internally and externally. However the report doesn't give a detailed view on the Data Protection Act or the Health And Safety aspect. The aims of the report are clear, and this is quite good. Although for high marks, the report could explain a little information regrading their case study. Such as 'HMV is a retailer which markets a number of entertainment products to consumers, such as DVD's, Blu-Rays, Music and Games'. The report shows a number of visual graphs/charts, and this is quite good, as this allows the examiner to visualise the report. However the report could include the data as well as the visual charts/graph to support these. As it's important to state where the data was from and the actual data used to format the visual display. The Data Protection Act has eight main principles, and these are missing from the report. These eight principles should each be explained using a small but detailed paragraph on each of the eight sections of this regulation.