He continues by comparing natural phenomena to a love relationship, the ‘sigh tempests’ relating to the element of air, and the ‘tear floods’ to the element of water. He uses this hyperbole to demand that his lover remain stoic and resist any show of emotion upon his departure (ll. 4-8).
Next, the element of earth is introduced. Earthquakes are perceived by everyone, and people often interpret them as omens of misfortune. It is understandable that an earthquake would be looked upon with fear because of its potential to ravage the land; wheras a trepidation affecting a celestial sphere would be viewed in a different light, especially one that is imperceptible and has no apparent meaning for the average person (Donne 444: 159 l. 11). 1
In order to understand the meaning of the third quatrain in the poem, it is necessary to consider the Ptolemaic Universe and the symbolism of the sphere. During the Middle Ages and the Elizabethan Age, the circle and sphere were looked upon as perfect shapes. The main influence behind that thinking may have been Greek philosophers such as Aristotle, who believed that since, ‘The motion of the celestial bodies is not straight and finite, but circular, invariable and eternal. So they themselves must be eternal, unalterable, divine’ (Pannekoek 115).
The well-educated Donne, 1572-1631, certainly studied famous Greek thinkers such as Aristotle and Ptolemy, and their views concerning the universe. Donne lived during a time when many people accepted the Ptolemaic theory of the universe, which held that the spherical planets orbited the earth in concentric circles called deferents. 2 Writing this poem in 1611, Donne would most likely be influenced by his previous classical studies, and he chose to use the circle and the sphere to represent a perfect relationship based on reason and harmony.
The ‘trepidation of the spheres’ is another obsolete astronomical theory, used to support the speaker’s point that great changes in the heavens may be imperceptible to the layman. (ll.11-12). The speaker presents this comparison between the earthquake and the ‘trepidation of the spheres’ to suggest that matters beyond one’s control should be approached rationally.
In quatrains four and five, the speaker urges his love to remain stoic by making any change in their relationship as imperceptible to others as the ‘trepidation of the spheres,’ and again, he uses terms from astronomy to illustrate his point. The term ‘sublunary’ refers to the surface below the moon. According to the Greek astronomers, this sublunar area, composed of the four elements, was imperfect. The sphere’s surface, composed of quinta essenta, the perfect part, radiates light and heat (Pannekoek 115).
The dull sublunary lovers (l. 13) are imperfect human beings who do not practice mature love. The soul of their love is ‘sense’ (l. 14), so they need physical contact to cement their relationship. However, the speaker suggests that reason can free itself from any connection with a sensory experience. Therefore, the lovers with fully developed souls ‘Care less, eyes, lips, and hands to miss’ (l. 20), having developed rational souls, the third part of the Aristotelian model for the human soul, consisting of vegetative, sense and rational parts. (Copleston, 328).
In quatrain six, Donne echoes the traditional marriage ceremony in which two become one, so the ‘two souls’ of the lovers are joined together. He describes separation as a stretching exercise in which the joined soul of the lovers is gold beat to an ‘airy thinness’ (l. 24). According to Pinka, the comparison is ‘beautiful and pure’ but ‘fragile’ since there is ‘expansion without increase’ (142). The ‘airy thinness’ emphasizes the stretching of the lovers’ resources, in that the love continues to exist, but its strength is weakened by the circumstances. He urges the lover to look at the separation in a positive light, but he sends out undertones suggesting that he is aware of the fragility of the situation.3
The speaker then begins his closing argument, in which he changes his symbol of perfection from the sphere to the circle. One might argue that the circle and the sphere are slightly different objects and should not be considered one and the same; however, the Ptolemaic Universe consisted of both perfect spheres and perfect circular orbits, and so the concept of circle and sphere both represented perfection. Poets and songwriters have often used sphere and circle symbolism. One such work, The Divine Comedy, written in three books: the Inferno, the Purgatorio, and the Paradiso by Dante Alighieri, still remains well-known today.
In Dante Alighieri’s Paradiso, a story of a pilgrim journeying through Paradise, Dante sees nine concentric circles in the eyes of Beatrice, his guide. Beatrice explains to him that each of nine circles represents an angelic order. The brightest circles are in the center nearest to God and represent the highest order of angels and the greatest good. According to Beatrice, each circle also corresponds to one of the nine spherical heavens consisting of the five planets, the sun, the moon, the fixed stars, and the Prime Mover.4
It does not seem unusual for Donne to include both the sphere and the circle in his poetry as symbols of perfection, since other writers had linked the circle and the sphere together in various ways throughout the history of science and literature.
The speaker in the poem is unique in that he does not compare the perfection of his love to a traditional object such as a rock or a fortress; instead he chooses to compare the twin legs of a compass to the lovers’ sense of union during absence (ll. 25-36). Such a comparison would be called metaphysical according to Gardner, who states that a metaphysical conceit must concern two things so dissimilar that we ‘feel an incongruity’ (19). Here, the poet must then proceed to persuade the reader that these things are alike in spite of their apparent differences (19-22).
The speaker proves the point by drawing the circle with the compass. The lover who stays behind is the fixed point, and the speaker is the other leg of the instrument. Without the ‘firmness’ of the fixed point, he would be unable to complete the journey and make the circle just (precise). The adverb ‘obliquely’ (l. 34) may have several different meanings. John Freccero supports the interpretation that obliquely means a spiral motion, referred to by the Neoplatonic tradition as a movement of the soul (286-87). Obliquely may also indicate a slant. Either the drawing instrument can be interpreted to move in a spiral, or the motion may refer to the second foot’s tilted position in relation to the fixed one in the center. Such a position would be required during the drawing of a circle.
According to Freccero, ‘No matter how far Donne roams his thoughts will revolve around his love.... At the end of the circle, body and soul are one’ (283). In Donne’s ‘Valediction,’ the human souls are described in the context of a joint soul that is stretched by the separation, or two souls joined within a circle of spiritual strength. Donne once stated in an elegy, ‘...perfect motions are all circular.’5 The circle in the ‘Valediction’ represents the journey during which two lovers endure the trial of separation, as they support each other spiritually, and eventually merge in a physically and spiritually perfect union.
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