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French writing assessment - Healthy lifestyle

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This is a 5 star piece of work. It uses a variety of tenses, personal opinions, negative phrases and extended sentences. To improve and ensure the top grades, check accents…
- Essay length: 429 words
- Submitted: 19/03/2012
- Marked by teacher: Rachel Forest 04/02/2012
- Reviewed by: medbh4805 01/01/1970
Write an essay to be published on your school website about this dilemma with reference to one experience you had when using the Internet. Discuss what should be made public and what should remain private,

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On the whole this is a very well written essay. It is well-structured with an effective opening, a logical sequence of ideas and a strong conclusion.
The vocabulary is appropriate…
- Essay length: 739 words
- Submitted: 30/12/2011
- Marked by teacher: Melissa Thompson 10/04/2013
- Reviewed by: sydneyhopcroft 04/04/2012
Compare and contrast the Functionalist and Marxist views of society.

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Overall this is an impressive essay that demonstrates excellent knowledge of the two viewpoints and also a comprehensive use of language and turn of phrase. At times the key terms…
- Essay length: 949 words
- Submitted: 07/11/2003
- Marked by teacher: Matthew Wilkin 09/04/2013
- Reviewed by: cwhite 19/03/2012
Why did so many people die in the 2010 Haiti earthquake?

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An excellent review of the main physical and human factors affecting the impacts of the Haiti earthquake. Very good use of geographical terminology and statistics. Some useful…
- Essay length: 1206 words
- Submitted: 16/01/2013
- Marked by teacher: Katie Price 29/12/1999
Conflict is often shown throughout the novella of 'Of Mice and Men'. Usually, it is a result of the strain that the Great Depression placed on the people who lived through it.

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This is an extremely well-structured and sophisticated response which examines thoroughly the theme of conflict. The points made are relevant and supported by apt examples and quotations. The…
- Essay length: 1265 words
- Submitted: 13/07/2012
- Marked by teacher: Stephen Evans 20/12/1999
To what extend do you agree with Rhodes view that the British Empire was beneficial to both Britain and the colonies?

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This is a thorough response which demonstrates strong understanding of the historiography and engages well with it. Good use has been made of examples, although it would have been beneficial…
- Essay length: 1696 words
- Submitted: 26/05/2012
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 01/10/2012
Write a letter to a headteacher persuading him/her that all students should take part in at least one hour's physical activity every day.

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An excellent letter written to persuade. Well written and logically structured, it includes tripling, repetition, rhetorical questions,personal case studies and statistics.
Vocabulary is well chosen for maximum effect and varied…
- Essay length: 402 words
- Submitted: 04/04/2012
- Marked by teacher: Katie Dixon 29/04/2112
Truman Show essay . Analyse how visual techniques are used to develop deeper ideas in a visual text you have studied.

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This is an excellent essay which systematically analyses the techniques used by the film maker. At times it veers towards mere description which is necessary when writing an essay on…
- Essay length: 1579 words
- Submitted: 28/03/2012
- Marked by teacher: Katie Dixon 29/04/2112
Does General Haig deserve the title Butcher of the Somme?

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Overall, this is an excellent response that answers the question well and is focused throughout. The author does well to support points with concise evidence but also ensures that both…
- Essay length: 855 words
- Submitted: 27/03/2012
- Marked by teacher: Natalya Luck 21/04/2012
Don't get me started on... Bullying

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An excellent piece of persuasive writing which uses rhetorical devices such as questions, imperatives, listing, tripling and real case scenarios to create a powerful essay.
Well planned and uses varied…
- Essay length: 1019 words
- Submitted: 20/03/2012
- Marked by teacher: Katie Dixon 29/04/2112