How successful was Wolseys Domestic policy?

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        Jack Stephenson

How successful was Wolsey’s Domestic policy

During his fourteen years of chancellorship Wolsey exercised considerable influence over Henry VIII’s domestic policy during the years 1515 to 1529, involving himself in economic, legal, aristocratic and church affairs. Wolsey’s domestic policy was relatively successful with some failures. Wolsey was no domestic reformer in any modern political sense and he saw his prime duty as Lord Chancellor.

Wolsey was either loved or hated for his wealth, position and lofty manner. Historians also differ in their views of Thomos Wolsey, Peter Gwyn sees Wolsey as a man of “enormous ability and unstoppable determination” with a huge capacity for hard work and whose reforms were limited because of the ambitions of Henry in Europe. Other historians like John Guy and David Loades acknowledge Wolsey’s abilities but are less effusive in their praise and see his own deficiencies as responsible for the failure of some of the reforms he embarked on.

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One area in which Wolsey is seen as having a great impact on is legal reform. Wolsey was keen to make it clear that no one was above the law and that the law as applicable to all so the wealthy/powerful could not escape. In 1516 Wolsey put forward a scheme to improve the whole legal system, the power of the court of the Star Chamber was to be increased and ordinary subject were to file their own cases in Chancery and Star Chamber. This certainly seemed to have been successful, in Chancery the number of cases went up ...

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I found one spelling mistake - the rest, grammar and punctuation, are perfect. The student makes great use of historians to back up their argument and presents the argument in a very well structured essay. The common danger is the structure of essay - a weak structure naturally gives way to a weak argument (as the argument is buried in a confused format). Thus, the student has handled this problem very well.

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