Vincent Hale
Work Experience Coursework
Work Experience Coursework
Mi experiencia profesional duró una semana y gocé de ella mucho. Trabajé con los contables. Un día quisiera ser contable. Durante mi experiencia profesional tuve que hacer la limadura y utilizar una computadora.
Llegué cada día a las nueve. Mi experiencia profesional duró hasta las cuatro. Viajé al trabajo sobre un autobús. Mi madre me recogió luego.
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Overall the candidate manages to convey ideas clearly,with good use of paragraphs to express separate ideas (eg. one paragraph to narrate one day of the work experience). More accurate than inaccurate constructions. Sometimes there is an incorrect use of tenses but mostly right. Relevant response to the task and shows ability to convey a lot of information clearly. This work deserves a 3-star mark (upper end of the range).