I have chosen to compare the poem

Comparison of Half-Caste and Nothings Changed From the poems I have studied and spent time analysing, I have chosen to compare the poem "Half Caste", by the poet John Agard and the poem "Nothings Changed" by the poet Afrika. My task is to show a detailed analysis and comparison of both poems I will show what I believe to be the poet's feelings and comment on them. I shall also give my own personal opinion on what I believe about the poems and how it made me feel. In the first poem I studied "Half Caste" the poet John Agard has expressed his feelings in an unusual but I believe a unique way. The poem is referring to how angrily Agard feels towards the term half-caste, however his anger is disguised by his humour. Agard uses his sense of humour throughout the poem; this clearly gets his emotions across to me being the reader. For example Agard introduces himself "standing on one leg" as he is a half caste person he humorously makes out, he is only half a person and this is why he stands on one leg. I feel that Agard has this shadow of humour that is covering up his real emotions, this maybe a sign of fear, as he doesn't know how to show his true feelings so instead he humours the reader and himself. Agard writes the poems as if he's talking directly to you, this technique of talking directly to you makes you feel more emotional I felt a little insecure and this makes you

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Comparing Three Poems 'Half-Caste' 'Search For My Tongue' & 'Unrelated Incidents'.

Comparing Three Poems 'Half-Caste' 'Search For My Tongue' & 'Unrelated Incidents'. Each of these three poems talk about certain problems faced by specific groups of people in today's society. The poems have been written specifically to illustrate to people who have been brought up with derogative ideas about different types of people, that there are people who are different, but are neither superior nor inferior to themselves. The main themes that run common in all 3 poems are the ideas of individualism, respect, culture and equality. The poem 'Half-Caste' by John Agard talks about the stereo typed judgement about half-caste people in society today. John Agard's main argument in the poem is that being a half-caste person does not make you half a human being. He talks about how people make 'assumptions' about half-caste people. "...and when I'm introduced to yu I'm sure you'll understand why I offer yu half-a-hand..." This quote suggests that non half-caste peoples attitudes towards half-caste people is that they are not human, and do not do everyday things the way they would do themselves. Agard exaggerates his ideas in order to make his argument a lot clearer. "..an when moon begin to glow I half-caste human being cast half-a-shadow..." It is obvious that half-caste people do not caste shadows different to anyone else, but the emphasis on the ridiculousness of the

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This essay will be comparing 'Presents from my aunts in Pakistan' talking about the difficulty in belonging to two cultures and 'Half - caste'

Both poems I have chosen are about identity and both use first person narrator to talk about autobiographical experiences. This essay will be comparing 'Presents from my aunts in Pakistan' talking about the difficulty in belonging to two cultures and 'Half - caste' which uses attacking language to get the poems point across. In presents from my aunts in Pakistan the writer describes gifts of the clothes and jewellery sent to her in England by her Pakistani relatives, she is drawn to the loveliness of the things given but feels much more comfortable in denim and corduroy. The poem is made of long lines, these lines aren't aligned neatly on the page but instead they are spread across the page, sometimes starting on the right hand side or the left. This symbolizes how the girl is feeling inside; it shows that she's torn between her Asian culture and her English Culture whereas in the poem Half-caste Agard does not use Standard English and punctuates the way he wants, this shows that he believes there isn't a right or wrong way of writing or even speaking. "When yu say half-caste yu mean when Picasso mix red and green is a half-caste canvas". In many ways the poem seems like it is related to her, as if it is telling a story whereas John Agard is from Guyana he decides to tell the poem in an informal style. In 'Presents from my Aunt in Pakistan shows' her feelings by

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Homework: Comparison of Half-Caste and Six O'clock News

Homework: Comparison of Half-Caste and Six O'clock News Half-Caste and Six O'clock News are very different poems. Firstly Half-Caste is written by John Agard whom has a Caribbean background whereas Six O'clock News is written phonetically by Tom Leonard from a Scottish culture. The poems use very different language. "This is thi six a clock new thi man said." This has a lot of non-standard English and is written how it is spelt. In Half-Caste it is very formal. "Excuse me standing on one leg, I'm half-caste." The narrator in Half-Caste is trying to get the point across that half-caste people are not half; they are full. Using ridicule, imperatives and repetition he mocks us about the way we judge half-castes. He uses colloquialism speech: "ah rass" and clever sentence structure: "and mix a black key with a white key" to stir the readers minds and really think deeply about the poem. Both poems use very short lines but are both written phonetically. This adds impact and keeps the reader interested rather than long, everlasting lines. The narrator in Six O'clock News is emphasizing the way that you only hear people with an "unaccented voice" on the BBC News. He does this very well by explaining that just because people talk differently to others, everyone has a different background and accent. He says "you wouldn't want me to talk about the truth with a voice like one of your

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Poetry Analysis of: Limbo, Blessing, and Half caste

Poetry Analysis Coursework Chosen poems: - * Limbo * Blessing * Half caste Edward Kamau Brathwaite: Limbo I have chosen four different poems of which come from varying cultural backgrounds and have a moral. I will now explain how the writers present their ideas and give the readers an insight into different cultures. Limbo is a poem, which shows us the feelings of slaves on slave ships written by Edward Kamau. This poem tells the story of slavery in a rhyming, rhythmic dance. It is ambitious and complex. There are two narratives running in parallel, which are, the actions of the dance, and the history of the people, which is being enacted. The poem shows a lot of repetition of phrases such as 'Limbo Limbo like me, Limbo Limbo like me'. This expresses that the phrase is dominant enough to be said twice. The poem has a very strong beat, suggesting the dance describes: where the word limbo appears as a complete line, it should be spoken slowly, the first syllable extended and both syllables stressed: Lim-bo. The writer shows fluent use of rhythm even by using varied length of lines, this makes the reader go along with the movement of both the poem and the storyline in general, it also makes it more involving to the reader. Limbo is a poem of positions as the writer uses such language to break down the moment in the poem, one example of this is when he uses the words

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Poem Comparison-Half Caste and I am not that Woman

7 August 2007 A Comparison of "I am not that Woman" with "Half Caste" The two poems I am going to compare are "I am not that Woman" by Kishwar Naheed and "Half Caste" by John Agard. Although these poems are essentially about different things, with "I am not that woman" being about a feminist and "Half Caste" about skin colour, underneath this they are both about being prejudiced against somebody for no real reason. The poem "Half Caste" begins with the words "Excuse me standing on one leg I'm half caste." This is an almost apologetic beginning to the poem, it immediately shows that being mixed race is seen as negative, and that the person is unsure of himself, because of this view. In contrast, "I am not that Woman" starts very strongly with the title words "I am not that woman." This, although also creating a feel that women are being treated unfairly, shows that the person in this poem is far stronger in her views that it is unjust, and will not stand for it, whereas the beginning of the other poem leads us to believe that the person will put up with the unfair treatment. "Half Caste" then goes on to question why "when picasso mix red and green" is not "a half caste canvas." This, as well as the example of the "half caste symphony," by Tchaikovsky, is used because these also use "half caste" things but these are accepted, and even highly regarded. Therefore, the poet is

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Comparison of the poems Half-caste and Not My Business.

Half-caste and Not My Business Essay John Agard and Niyi Osundare have both written poems that protest about events or attitudes of people. Agard is From the Caribbean where the population is made up of people from lots of different races. Therefore he is used to being around people of mixed race and will know from first hand experience how horrible it can be to be called only half a person. Osundare has got a good point to make here which is that if people see something going on that is wrong but does not directly involve them, they should do what they can to stop the wrong doing rather than leave it as it may well be them someday and there could be no one to save them. You never know. The first poem is about the term 'Half-Caste' which the poet: John Agard, objects to as he thinks that it makes us think of people of mixed race as only half a person instead of a whole person or individual. The next poem 'Not My Business' is about the violence used by the state authorities against the people of Nigeria. The poet: Niyi Osundare believes that you should stand up for what is right, regardless of whether it bothers you at that specific time. 'Not My Business' is said to echo this statement: "First they came for the socialists, and I did not speak out because I was not a socialist. Then they came for the trade unionists, and I did not speak because I was not a trade

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How do the poems, 'Half-Cast', 'Nothings Changed,' and 'Two Scavengers in a truck, Two beautiful People in a Mercedes,' expree Anger?

How do the poems, 'Half-Cast', 'Nothings Changed,' and 'Two Scavengers in a truck, Two beautiful People in a Mercedes,' expree Anger? Courtney Lomas All three poems express their anger towards discrimination: 'Half-Caste' and 'Nothings Changed' are written about how racism has affected them and their lives, 'Two Scavengers...' express views on class discrimination. 'Half-Caste' is written as if it is been spoken in a Caribbean dialect, giving the impression the speaker is of a mixed race.In the poem he illustrates the way he feels about how he is treated as a ''half-caste,half person.'' The longer stansas in the poem tell the story of how his race has affected his life, and the way he feels about himself, and the shorter stansa are used to introduce and close the poem. The poems irregularity in terms of lay out, may illustrate the irregularity this man feels in his life,he feels he doesn't feel accepted in either the black or the white community. He quotes ''am i half a man?''This proves his distress,and although he uses humour the poem has a serious message.Agard uses repetition effectively thorught the poem, for example, ''explain yuself, wha you mean?'' This line is used in every stransa.Agard alkso uses surreal comparissons to express his emotions to the reader such as ''black key...white key''Here he is contrasting the black race, and the white race and wander where

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Compare and contrast the cultures of two poems - Unrelated Incidents, by Tom Leonard and Half-Caste, by John Agard

This essay will be based on comparing and contrasting the cultures of two poems. The two poems I will be talking about are "Unrelated Incidents", by Tom Leonard and "Half-Caste", by John Agard. The poems are based on different cultures, and whether or not it matters what culture you have. Both of the poems are structured in interesting ways. "Unrelated Incidents" is set out in a long column with 38 lines and no more than four words per line. It seems to be set out like an auto-cue TV presenters use instead of scripts. There are no sections or verses in it, whereas "Half-Caste" has four verses which is (in my opinion) split into two sections - the first two verses consists of John Agard asking questions and using the word "half-caste" to describe things where colours are mixed, like artwork and piano keys, and in the second pair of verses he is using "half-caste" to describe parts of his body and states of mind. "Half-Caste" has 53 lines and no full stops. It has what (at a first glance) seem to be random forward slashes, but I have now realised that it seems to welcome a pause after each forward slash. In "Unrelated Incidents" there aren't any capital letters except for "BBC" which is something I didn't pick up on at first. The poems are both performance poems and the tone or mood of them are similar - there is some humour in both poems and they look as though they should be

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Comparing Poems From Other Cultures

Compare how identity is shown to be important in half-caste and one other poem Half-caste and Search for my Tongue In these two poems, identity is seen to be important, for in half-caste the author is trying to seek acceptance from others around him for who he is as a person, but in search for my tongue the author is losing her identity and is seeking help in finding out who she as a person. Half-caste portrays someone who feels that people label others without knowing them as people first, and how much it can hurt them. For John Agard says: "Explain yuself, wha you mean, when yu say half caste". This shows that he is confused about how he portrays himself to others, and how others perceive him. This make you think that the way in people perceives you on first appearance makes you who you are. Search for my tongue is like a cry out to others to help with her lost mother tongue, and she doesn't know what her identity is because she is confused about which language is her. It also shows how people don't understand how she feels or understand what she is going through with her struggle with the two languages that she uses. For it says: "You ask me what I mean by saying I have lost my tongue." This shows that she feels isolated from others as they do not understand the internal struggle she is going through having to lose her original identity - her mother tongue - to a

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