AS and A Level

49,246 AS and A Level essays

Outline how and why federalism has changed since the 1960s.

5 star(s)

Overall this is a very good essay. Although the essay is chronological, which is often not the best way to answer questions, here, the way the question is worded,…
- Essay length: 1289 words
- Submitted: 10/03/2011
- Marked by teacher: Jessica Jung 19/02/2012
Consider the view that the arguments for having an electoral college to elect the President are no longer valid

5 star(s)

Overall this is a very good essay. Although there is still room for improvement, the main points are well explained and good examples are used to highlight the points…
- Essay length: 1797 words
- Submitted: 07/03/2011
- Marked by teacher: Jessica Jung 07/04/2012
Critically examine the Functionalist idea that the nuclear family exists for the benefit of everyone.

5 star(s)

This essay would score 5/5 stars. It contains breadth (lots of studies and named sociologists) and depth (it explains each one well). The candidate scores well on application(sticking to the…
- Essay length: 1611 words
- Submitted: 31/01/2011
- Marked by teacher: Lesley Clark 07/02/2012
TO WHAT EXTENT CAN A STREETCAR NAMED DESIRE BE CALLED A TRAGEDY?

5 star(s)

This is a very strong essay - well expressed, perceptive and effectively researched, showing an excellent knowledge of the text. Occasionally there is too much context at the expense of…
- Essay length: 2052 words
- Submitted: 17/12/2010
- Marked by teacher: Roz Shipway 22/02/2012
Themes and Characters in Boule de Suif

5 star(s)

A 5 star piece of work. The student uses a range of grammatical structure, accurately, and a wide range of relevant topic-specific in order to express very clear ideas and…
- Essay length: 1165 words
- Submitted: 12/12/2010
- Marked by teacher: Sarah Benson 08/01/2013
Discuss the extent to which globalisation has been beneficial to Africa, China, America or Britain.

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This essay covers many of the main points and really gets into its stride towards the end when it examines why Asia has benefitted from globalisation but not Africa.…
- Essay length: 2045 words
- Submitted: 05/11/2010
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 05/04/2012
Notes on Un Duel - Guy De Maupassant

5 star(s)

This is a 5 star piece of work, which deals with the main ideas of the novel in a well-structured and clear way. There is a good range of vocabulary…
- Essay length: 861 words
- Submitted: 10/10/2010
- Marked by teacher: Sarah Benson 08/01/2013
Notes on La Mere Sauvage - Guy De Maupassant

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A 5 star piece of work, which demonstrates an excellent level of understanding of French Grammar, with a broad range of structures and vocabulary. Ideas are well-expressed and the structure…
- Essay length: 835 words
- Submitted: 10/10/2010
- Marked by teacher: Sarah Benson 08/01/2013
Stereochemistry of Butenedioic acid

5 star(s)

A very high level account of isomerism. This goes into much detail and is explained beautifully. There are some answers to commonly asked questions at the end of the report
- Essay length: 1911 words
- Submitted: 08/09/2010
- Marked by teacher: Brady Smith 10/04/2013
The aim of this essay is to discuss the relevance of John Keynes to the current macroeconomic situation in the UK.

5 star(s)

Excellent piece of work. Well researched and argued. You could argue that Keynes is less relevant in the present economic crisis because this is not a normal economic crisis. Normally…
- Essay length: 1788 words
- Submitted: 02/06/2010
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 12/02/2012